(Rough Draft Review Worksheet 1)Due FRI (02/02) before 11:59pm.Fill out the worksheet below and post your answers below.
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Prof. Song
2/1/2018 08:05:05 am
Remember, although your answers come out like blocks of undefined text, that your answers to me are properly formatted.
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kendal feigle
2/1/2018 11:15:58 am
1) Language holds stronger power over technology. Language has this power of manipulating the humans mind in many different ways. Words is what causes us to feel our common emotions. 2) Language, Power, Technology 3) Power, Language, Manipulate 4) Language is a powerful asset to life depending how we use or also interpreted it. 5) Technology is generally something that alters something or can our life easier and more efficient. 6) Primary source. I choose My Sister's Keeper because it has a very strong example of how powerful words can truly be if you just open your mind and listen. 7) I choose this topic because ever since I've first seen this movie its always had a strong emotional influence making you view life in a different kind of way. 8) 1. Anna speaks out with power explaining she has the rights of her own body, explaining it should her choice to donate her organs. 2. Sara doesn’t take to consideration how her kids feeling she is being selfish with her own feelings. It takes all three of her kids expressing how the feel numerous times to get her to understand. 3. In the entire Naruto series, he influences people with the power behind his words. 4. Callie speaks out sharing her emotion yet personal story with the world hoping to encourage foster kids all around to know they have the power to be heard. 5. This article "The Power of Language" has this power to open the mind in ways I've truly never viewed them before Michelle knows the power to persuade and catch her readers attention. 9) 1. power, rights, 2. selfish, expressing, 3. influences, power 4. encourage, power, 5. persuade, open minds,
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Hugo Acuna
2/1/2018 06:00:36 pm
1)Language is more powerful than technology because without it, technology would not be as advanced as it is today. 2)Language, Power, Technology 3)Language, Power, Advanced 4)Language is a form of communication, either written or spoken. 5)Technology is a collection of skills, methods, and processes used in production of goods and services. 6)Friends, The Walking Dead, Fortnite, GTA, Coco 7)These shows and games are some of my favorite things to watch/play on my spare time. I used a whole bunch because I messed up (lol). 9)Power, Popularity, Success, Emotion, Story-Telling 10) I used one source for each of my supporting reasons. I honestly do not know source I will use on my essay, but I'll probably end up using an entirely new one. One in mind is Fifa. It's a football/soccer video game that I can maybe tie to all of my supporting reasons.
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Hugo Acuna
2/1/2018 06:06:31 pm
8) 1. The show Friends was able to popularize many phrases, such as "How You Doin'". 2. The survivors of The Walking Dead survive using communication without Technology, such as internet and phones. 3. Coco uses story-telling as a source of powerful language 4. Fortnite requires communication between teammates in order to be successful. 5. Grand Theft Auto uses cutscenes to show emotions of the characters, using Language, vocal and body.
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Emily Hingle
2/2/2018 07:25:29 am
(1) Language is more powerful than technology because language is used to speak, tell how someone is feeling and also to help solve problems. Language is apart of our everyday lives and is vital to us. (2) Language, technology, powerful (3) Talk, feelings, problems (4) Language is the way, that we as human beings communicate. (5) Technology is the way that we communicate through computers, phones, tablets, Etc. (6) Full House Television Series (7) The source I am using is an interesting source I am using because it explains that language is more powerful than technology by explaining how this house hold can get crazy if language is not used. (8) 1. we use language to talk 2. communication has to do with language because you use language to communicate 3. Language can also get you into trouble because it can be misinterpreted 4. language in the Tanner household is very strong because they use it on a daily basis. 5. language between friends can sometimes get complicated and start drama and fights between friends.
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Prof. Song
2/2/2018 08:55:36 am
Hey so there'a a few of you who are forgetting that #4 should not have the same keywords as #3. Remember, PROMPT keywords are MY keywords that I forced on you to answer. THESIS keywords are YOUR keywords that make this whole writing project YOUR ARGUMENT.
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Rae Adair
2/2/2018 08:14:56 pm
1.) Technology has the ability to influence others or can be created with immense strength which is what makes technology more powerful than language whether it is written or spoken. 2.) Three prompt keywords are: technology, language, and power. 3.) My thesis keywords are: influence, create, strength. 4.) Language is a broad form of self-expression. 5.) Technology is an invention that stems from intelligence and/or passion. 6.) The cultural artifact that I have chosen to represent the power of technology is Big Hero 6. 7.) Big Hero 6 showcases some amazing inventions and technology and it's a heartwarming movie that I love, so it's perfect. 8.) My five supporting reasons are A. Big Hero 6 has amazing technology that is close to being real or is real. B. Baymax, a personal healthcare companion exists and robots could replace us in the workforce. C. Machines have a lot of power and are dangerous. D. AI is existent and robots are replacing us just as humans in general. E. Social media enhances our language by giving us an audience. 9.) My SR keywords are: amazing, robots, machines, power, dangerous, AI, social media, enhances. 10.) Not required. 11.) " Robots will take over most jobs within 30 years, experts warn." by Sarah Knapton. Bomb: A Race to Build -and Steal- The World's Most Dangerous Weapon by Steve Sheinkin. Make Happy by Bo Burn.
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Taylor Klekar
2/2/2018 08:40:17 pm
{1} I believe that language and by extension, communication is more powerful than technology. Because I think that language is one of the essential cultural bedrocks that have enabled our society to grow as much as they have. {2} Language, Technology, Powerful. {3} Essential, Enabled, Language. {4} I would like to define language as the transportation of information through verbal and written means with cultural history put into the account. {5} technology is an innovated way to better communicate to one another. {6} My primary source is the movie/ book “The Martian”. {7} the reason I chose “The Martian” is because of how the narrative emphasizes both technology and language. Through that emphasis on both of them, it shows how gripping a lack of communication can be when the technology to do so is right there. {8}-{9} 1) Without complex language interactions in high stakes situation, life could be lost a lot easier. 2) We as humans crave to have complex language interaction. 3) The beginning of writing paved the way for a better way for language to travel between individuals. 4) language can communicate subtext using tone and inflection.
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Amiel Garcia Rodriguez
2/2/2018 08:51:32 pm
(1)Language is more powerful than technology because it creates diverse thinking, it’s a far more practical form of communication, it unites people together, Body Language is universal, and we have used it as a device to pass down knowledge and wisdom for thousands of years
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Amiel Garcia Rodriguez
2/2/2018 08:55:27 pm
(8)Language…
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Kevin Ma
2/2/2018 09:21:39 pm
1.) Tone of voice can be use to express them self in which how we would criticize on individuals or towards an object.
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Christopher M. Campos
2/2/2018 09:23:37 pm
1) Language is so much more important as compared to technology due to the reason that technology that was not only invented by the mind but from vocally that comes from language. Besides how else could we expressed our technology ideas without the help from language? 2) Language, technology and power. 3) Speaking vocally moreover fluently, Body language as to expressed ideas, and Presentations. 4) Language is a powerful form of communication, likewise, it encompasses us on how society works together with others. 5) Technology is an invention of tools and devices that are made to be beneficial to society whether its humans or animals. 6) Arrival by the film director Denis Villeneuve. 7) The movie Arrival demonstrates how language plays a critical tool when even today's technology cannot interpret new forms of communication. 8) I. The language we use in our everyday vocabulary. II. Foreign language how it is very useful to learn and understand because it is how we share ideas and opinions. III. Language is also how we present ourselves in work, school or even to large crowd of people. IV. Body language such as a distressed look or facial expressions that need no explanation. V. Language is how of some of technology most popular ideas were invented such as for example the way we text by using symbols instead of words that scream out what we are trying to convey. 9) Symbols, body language, foreign language, facial expressions and gestures. 10) Arrival by the film director Denis Villeneuve is my best source because it shows how language is used to communicate with the abnormal part of life.
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Christopher M. Campos
2/2/2018 09:35:33 pm
Arrival-Denis Villeneuve - Eric Heisserer - Shawn Levy - Dan Levine - Aaron Ryder - David Linde - Jóhann Jóhannsson - Bradford Young - Joe Walker
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Jamillah Leah Davis
2/2/2018 09:26:47 pm
1) 1)Technology is far more powerful than language because it only continues to advance as for language it stays consistent
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alejandra s
2/4/2018 06:51:12 pm
1) Language is more powerful than technology because it is used in a every day life. It is as well key to our survival and communication
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Sydney Sotengco
2/5/2018 04:41:19 pm
1. Technology is more powerful than language because it is more advanced and it is how everyone communicates nowadays. Technology can help us communicate with others around the world and even translate different languages. 2. Technology, advanced, communicates. 3. World, translate, languages. 4. Language is how we talk and think. 5. Technology is what gets our opinions and ideas out into the world. Technology is progressive and keeps progressing day by day. 6. Dear Evan Hansen. 7. Evan Hansen uses technology to alter a classmates reasoning for suicide while bringing awareness to suicide prevention. 8. I. Fake emails. II. The Connor project. III. Fundraiser to reopen abandoned apple orchard. IV. Transition to Black Mirror episode “Nose Dive” where technology controlled daily life. V. Language didn’t matter, only rating. 9. I. Emails. II. Project. III. Fundraiser. IV. Controlled. V. Didn’t matter. 11. Black mirror
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Efrain Mendoza
2/6/2018 09:19:55 pm
1. 1. For that reason I believe that language is more powerful than technology because in the movie Interstellar the main goals would have not been achieved without some sort of communication.
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Romeo Pimentel
2/7/2018 03:23:06 pm
1. I use my phone every day in class and instead of interacting with others and make new friends at my old school. Phones have taken the ability of me and many other people to communicate to others and meet new people. Technology has become more powerful than language these days of modern technology since it getting more advanced and taken over everything like, Alexa being able to know everything about you for the many things you keep asking her.
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Beatris Luevano
2/8/2018 10:10:52 am
1.Language is more powerful than technology, because we communicate not just with words but with our person.
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